Phenomenal! The story was well-built and had a surprisingly touching ending.
The team has done a very good job on this project.
I'll look forward to more projects from you, Dexta ;)
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Phenomenal! The story was well-built and had a surprisingly touching ending.
The team has done a very good job on this project.
I'll look forward to more projects from you, Dexta ;)
You did a really great job on the voice acting, jini
Achievements don't work for me. Any ideas?
the ship part was so broken lol not only does holding not work, i cant even TOUCH the fuckionbg platformmm
I like this type of review, you also need to read the instructions below before you start writing something.
fun lil game
i suggest adding achievements if the player was able to collect all the items
Thank you! That sounds nice, but unfortunately I'm a total newbie making games, so I wouldn't know how to do that!
The good thing about the first drop is that the melody sounds space-y. The piano should sound louder, though.
The second drop's melody sounds kinda awkward. Like, it doesn't really resolve as much as it should. There is a bar that I think may be off-key, or at least off-chord.
I get the intention of the 3rd drop. However, I'd rather the bass volume stay as it is throughout the track, instead of a sudden increase in volume. This can be risky as it can lead to clipping. Also, the bass sounds like it was... sampled in a way.
The fourth drop is fine.
Quality: 9/20
Race: 5/10
Space: 4/10
I gotta give credit to how space-y this track overall sounds. It is experimental and deep.
There are some creative elements, such as the glitchy drums and 02:58
I recommend being careful when EQing the low-end.
Although there is pacing, the second drop doesn't really sell the idea of a race music. Like it's chill music with jungle breaks
Personally, I'd like to hear a more concise collaboration. In this case, I can clearly hear who did what part. In my view, this is not a collab. It is a mashup until proven otherwise
Quality: 3/10
Race: 3/10
Space: 7/10
Heyo! Thank you for the review! Everything said will be taken into consideration
The constant pacing of this track gives off a great race music vibe
Creative score overall, nice time signature utilisation, funky drum solos
This composition would benefit a lot from better transitions. In cases like 05:00 or 06:00 or any beat switches, all they need is anticipation, and a lead-in (either melody, bass, automation, etc)
I'd love the track, or should I say the journey, if there were more EQing and reverb in it. The drums were dry.
Quality: 3/10
Race: 7/10
Space: 4/10
thanks for the in depth and honest review, I definitely plan on revisiting this track once I make an EP including it. I definitely agree that there are transitions that are terrible (especially at 8:00 at around the 9th minute mark), however I don't think the 5:00 and 6:00 are bad, thematically I think they suit, especially considering the lyrics which yeah aren't in this version and the criticism is valid as for that. I think I could do something more with the drums at 6:00, but I wouldn't change anything with the 5:00 transition.
And now that you say the drums sound dry, I cannot unhear it. I knew there was something wrong with the drums but I couldn't pin point it, that would make a lot of sense, thanks.
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