nice riff
nice riff
Thanks!
pros:
-creative and dynamic composition
-consist of many emotions effectively linked together
-somewhat realistic drum patterns with variations
-great harmony and solidity between instruments and appacella
cons:
-over-compression can be heard throughout the vocals
-an excessive low-mid frequency range
-certain instruments sounding awkwardly loud in certain segments
+3:23 piano
+5:06 brass(?)
C: 5 P: 4.5 M/M: 3.5 U: 4.5 O: 5
My score: 22.5/25
Thanks for judging Jinz! I agree with all the cons tbh, the last three are a bit more extreme elements so I understand if not everyone sees them fit.
I appreciate you calling themz drum recordingz semi realistic, it means I played em well 😂
sounds like fart
muddy and harshly compressed SFXs
the rest was fine
:nerd:
*nasally snort*
interesting sound designs, I can jam to the rhythm. Very aggressive intro btw.
There is a problem with the piano, however. It's bloody distorted. I can hear it screaming for its life. Just so you know, loud doesn't equal good. The drop can be as loud as you want, but when the breaks come, it gotta be relaxing.
Overall, the track needs sidechain.
It seemed to me that the piano was not loud enough, and I turned the volume up to the maximum, but it turned out to be a bug. So it already fixed ! Thanks for your review !!
catchy and wacky melody, I like that uniqueness, especially at 1:30
I have a suggestion, instead of using the same sound throughout the track, try different variety and see what fits the melody the section is playing
I would call this Video Game, rather than Industrial
i had no fucking idea what genre to pick so i just randomly chose one
One word of advice: Drums should be mono
I dont care about what's shown in other media. I talk about what I hear right here right now. Also where did you mention that you know the drum's problem?
I already know that. This song is already old, because it is about 6 months ago when it was made. I recommend you to check out my YT channel for more recent content. I didn't spent much time here to upload all my tracks, so you may as well check out my YT channel.
5 years later you will revisit this masterpiece
Thank You!
The track could really use some drums. And the instruments need some reverbs cuz, at the end of the track, it awkwardly stops.
I really like the melodies here. They are catchy and unique.
Also, my condolences to Kolon.
Thank you for your sympathy. And I'll be sure I'll be sure to add drums along with the reverb.
Edit: If you're reading this, they've been added.
Jini Jam, better known as JinZ, was a part-time Youtuber, producer, and illustrator. Founder of: WillTril, Reno Motion.
Age 19, Male
College Student
Viet Nam
Joined on 3/16/18