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In case it isn't obvious, the car-to-screeching noise is the most creative thing in GP1. The bass designs are like candy to my ears—sweet and addicting. There is good transitioning (especially at 02:08) and punchy kicks. The orchestral nature of the track is very nice, especially the outro. Surprisingly, the sounds work well together composition-wise. The synth leads are quieter in the first drop when combined with the basses. On a macro level, this becomes an issue as well. That is the volume differential between the 1st and the 2nd/3rd drops. I am aware that this is a co-op issue. It's okay that the music has a variety of snares. However, the first drop snare can be more forceful. From personal experience, when making screeching basses, dubstep producers tend to have it as a secondary element, with rhythmic (4th-note) basses serving as the dominant element.s. And I agree with them. Without those pulsing and rhythmic basses, the drop can sound empty and even weak. I haven't been able to make out what the outro was about. Was it a victory theme? It doesn't sound like one to me. Overall, the track works in a race and has some arctic elements such as the bells and LDnB genre.

3manonMusic responds:

The outtro was in fact a victory theme yes! Thanks for the kind feedback!

the drums should be louder, and for this track I think the snare should have a longer tail
overall, not bad sound designs

you should learn the anatomy of drums (what is the kick, what is the snare, etc)

sweet tom fills, it sets up the theme of the track
but sometimes, you should let it go cuz if there are too many things played at once, it can become a mess (00:55)
nice sound designs

nice vibe
i recommend not compressing so much that it clips

the waveform is limited to the point of clipping so watch out next time
the track the nice sound overall, there should be melody variety tho

the kick is oddly loud and the snare is oddly quiet, lol
i'd like to hear more bass tho

sometimes you should switch up the melody so it doesn't sound boring

also, this isn't techno

groovy riff, the track is nice overall
the drums are too loud tho, resulting in clipping

It is very nice and sweet, the track is dynamic and i love the piano break, i wish that piano part was louder tho
I recommend having some sidechain

Roina responds:

I received your feedback well! I will reflect your opinions when making the next song and come back with a better song :> Thank you for listening to my song!

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