kinda groovy, i like the sweet-sounding melody, sometimes there's a contrast between low and high notes which is nice
i'd prefer those instruments have reverb tho
kinda groovy, i like the sweet-sounding melody, sometimes there's a contrast between low and high notes which is nice
i'd prefer those instruments have reverb tho
Cheers man, thanks for the feedback.
as seen from the waveform, your vocal and effect samples are too loud
the drums should be louder
the drums are pretty loud, and clipping does not equal to heaviness
transitions are quite awkward, I'd say they're anti-climatic, I recommend adding drum fill. Another thing that adds to this awkwardness is the emptiness of the intro/break
there are some interesting melodies here, but i suggest you switch up/ change it so that it doesn't sound repetitive
AI music?
not quite lol
i like the riffs
tho if it helps, you should slow down so you don't miss any beat
Thanks for recommendation.
did you record this on your phone
i know lofi has jazzy and complicated chords and allat but at some point you gotta remember that it's music to relax, not music to hear dissonance (01:28)
sometimes that dissonance can work to tell a story believe it or not some lofi does have it but it's still chill with that dissonance, if you want a more dissonant lofi track check out sylva, also lo-fi doesn't have to be all complex my lofi stuff is pretty simple to make if you know how music works.
god i love the 0:49 part so much, it reminds me of the classic piano tracks
did you play this live? cuz it sounds very very nice
No this cannot be played live (unless as a duet), as the notation stated I made this version a while ago before even starting to actually play the piece and settled eventually for the other version which is also uploaded. :)
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