make sure to add some bass
make sure to add some bass
i will try :D
nice beat but so much distortion
Oh no, 2 stars(
There's a bit of distortion here, I think
funky! i love how you combine many different genres into one track
Thank you! I didn't had any special ideas for this track, so I just wrote whatever came to mind
I gotta give credit to how space-y this track overall sounds. It is experimental and deep.
There are some creative elements, such as the glitchy drums and 02:58
I recommend being careful when EQing the low-end.
Although there is pacing, the second drop doesn't really sell the idea of a race music. Like it's chill music with jungle breaks
Personally, I'd like to hear a more concise collaboration. In this case, I can clearly hear who did what part. In my view, this is not a collab. It is a mashup until proven otherwise
Quality: 3/10
Race: 3/10
Space: 7/10
Well, it's okay if you don't like the song, details like what you say about the mix are elements that i do need to polish, the thing is that we both complemented each other's ideas, i used ethereal elements similar to what he proposed and at the same time he added certain sounds inspired by what i did so really in the end, even though each one ended up putting together a piece separately, the two were part of the same idea
So even though you gave us two stars and three out of ten for quality and I'm very tempted to tell you that what we did was not a mashup but your face is, a mashup between a chimp and a whale and that is why your profile picture is obscured, because you are a chimp-whale 🐒🐳
Instead, I thank you for taking the time to write your review and I wish you a good day 🌞
Heyo! Thank you for the review! Everything said will be taken into consideration
The constant pacing of this track gives off a great race music vibe
Creative score overall, nice time signature utilisation, funky drum solos
This composition would benefit a lot from better transitions. In cases like 05:00 or 06:00 or any beat switches, all they need is anticipation, and a lead-in (either melody, bass, automation, etc)
I'd love the track, or should I say the journey, if there were more EQing and reverb in it. The drums were dry.
Quality: 3/10
Race: 7/10
Space: 4/10
thanks for the in depth and honest review, I definitely plan on revisiting this track once I make an EP including it. I definitely agree that there are transitions that are terrible (especially at 8:00 at around the 9th minute mark), however I don't think the 5:00 and 6:00 are bad, thematically I think they suit, especially considering the lyrics which yeah aren't in this version and the criticism is valid as for that. I think I could do something more with the drums at 6:00, but I wouldn't change anything with the 5:00 transition.
And now that you say the drums sound dry, I cannot unhear it. I knew there was something wrong with the drums but I couldn't pin point it, that would make a lot of sense, thanks.
The drop's call n' response really bangs, great sampling and sound design.
The sine arp really sells the space-sounding music
The drums could be louder and punchier
For the first drop, it is repetition, but done right. However, the same can't be said for the second drop, as it is almost a 1:1 copy
Quality: 13/20
Race: 4/10
Space: 5/10
thank you so much JinZ!
The composition and scoring are great overall, it's very dreamy, the background synth (0:15) makes the track space-y
Pretty good volume balance from each person. However, when combined, there should be more consideration.
The way I can see it being improved is through contrast
The piano is low-mid-freq heavy, so having a high-freq heavy background beat would make a better production. Another easy way to enhance it is to lower the volume of the left-hand piano.
Quality: 7/10
Race: 2/10
Space: 8/10
Thanks Andy!
This is a very well-written score, with key changes, call n' response, leitmotif, etc
Every instrument works and harmonises well with the others
A few key volume imbalances are heard in the kicks, the toms, and Lap 3's guitar
Quality: 7/10
Race: 4/10
Space: 5/10
I have to give you right for that yea. For some reason some notes of the guitar became soft, especially the ones I added later. It's weird.
Could you elaborate the low space/race score on discord?
Everything about the vocal has been said
Aside from that, the instrumentals are nice, I like the bridge (it has potential) and the hard stomping kick
The drops have enjoyable background melodies, and in the second drop, the half-time hits hard
One can argue that the vocal melody is emotional, but uhm... it sounds like a chipmunk sang it, so it lost the emotion, RIP
Quality: 5/10
Race: 6/10
Space: 10/30
"To read in chipmunk voice" Thanks for the detailed review!
Fair, Neptunian Language has been often mocked for it's odd pitch, lmao
For Immy: you've improved a lot, some parts are groovy, interesting synth presets, I suggest lowering the volume of some drum fills
For Zuwer: nice score overall. Creative melodies played by fitting instruments, fast melody with a fast bell, and slow melody with a slow synth. Cool drums as well.
Just in case this goes unsaid: This is not a collab
Quality: 4/10
Race: 7/10
Theme: 5/10
thanks for the honest review
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