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you can already guess what I am going to talk about the melody so let's put that aside
the theme of the track isn't stable, you have this very happy arpeggio (at this point, it's an arp, it's not a melody anymore) but then you have those dark atmospheric pads, drums, and winds, and it is unnecessary. And I feel like the arp and the pads don't go well together in terms of scales, For example, the arp goes in C Maj but the pads go in C Min.
I like the intro, but I wish it was used more.
the final thing, next time, please fade out the audio, or at least have some reverb, you can't just let it be cut like that outro.

Arika2 responds:

Yah... thank you :P

it has good mix, and instruments, I like the intense intro and the fast-paced arpeggio running from left to right.
The problem is the compression/mastering, make sure to prioritize the vocals more next time ;)
Also, the first build-up and the drop don't go well to each other, one that is intense, one that is straight-up relaxing.
One final note, don't ya think that this is too much for a liquid DnB? I mean, liquid sounds more minimal, I'd say this is normal DnB

ProjectSoary responds:

Thanks for the review! Much appreciated.

whooooooooooooooo
what a journey amirite
this song really drives me through a story, the introduction of the protagonist, something happened so it builds up to the second drop aka the first incident, then the protagonist thought he had done, but he hadn't reached the final boss, and this is where i appreciate you, the fourth and final drop is way intense than the others.
(at least that's what i think)

the song has many moods, scary, intense, emotional, yet it has the same theme as DnB, and I like that
the 04:30 part is just simply beautiful
oh yeah, forgot to mention, I like your creativity in using various samples, drums, especially the man screaming lmao, I wonder how long did It take you to finish it?
My man this is high quality music, you should get more notice, you're underrated af ;)

Zerisan responds:

Thank you for taking the time to analyze all of this, really love your theatrical interpretation.
Track took around 13 hours total to finish.

i like how you added the background noises makes the music sounds more realistic
at some parts, the piano just gone cut, like, completely silent, might wanna hold the notes a bit longer, but if you don't want to, i suggest adding reverb to the piano

cjsixpointfive responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

beautiful voice
clean mix

get this lad more attention

Zepheriyah responds:

i agree, thank you <3

this sounds so happy, really liking those instruments

Tangerine responds:

Thanks, that's what I was going for. It was fun messing with xylophones for a change.

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