I like where you're going with this. It's a nice little emotional, yet powerful track.
Ah, MAN. This feels like you've awoken a life force for a hero. The track starts off slowly and is rather dark. Then comes a half-empty drop. But sooner, there's a lead to fill that void. As if it's one's life is being revived. And as the breakdown hits, everyone was surprised to see the hero to come back. As the chiptune begins, we can see that our hero is ready to shine. The melody at that part is quite heroic as well. Unlike the first drop, the second is brighter, and more powerful because now the hero is here to save the day. The track ends with a build that promises this battle is not the end. The journey of our hero has just begun.
Well while that was deep and all, I still have some suggestion for the overall production. First of all, one of the first things that comes to my mind was how weak the build up was. At the first glance, I was thrown off by the drop (which wasnt a good thing). There was little to no correlation between the build up and the drop. What I wanna suggest here is that you have a stronger build up. Maybe adding more fxs, uplifters, or you can automate the low pass filter of the supersaw to tell the listener what's gonna happens seconds later.
I have no bad comments on the synths you used. They are all good in their way. Though, they're kinda dry. Unless youve used a sample, I highly suggest altering the melodies. I can clearly hear you repeat the same chiptune melody and that's kinda drifting me off, especially when it's the outro.