JinZ's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Disc]

are those melodies yours, or basically a sample and you just add some effects on it, cuz sometimes, it sounds pretty repetitive, I'd suggest to play around with the melody

BlockGhost responds:

Most of it was sample. I like it repetitive :) thanks for the review <3

[>DEM0TIVATED<]

i understand

nothing

MandrakeGuy responds:

thats understandable, theres actually a big meaning for why i made this

recently iv been having my own little cycle, where i fall in love with something, then get demotivated to do said thing, its sad because i still love those things, iv lost many things to thiss cycle and i wanna keep doing it... but i cant because of this

so i made this! the glitch effect can be split into the quieter one, and the louder intense one, and i like to think its two parts of my brain fighting over motivation, quite glitchy is like 'just let him do this plz' and the loud one replies by going 'i dont want this sack of shit to make this'

by the end iv lost all hope to make something like artwork, and its complete silence

its sad for me but its a thing i have to get use to, hopefully this NEVER happens with music <3

[By My Side]

drop is pretty boring to my taste

Synfang responds:

Care to offer constructive criticism on how I could improve? After all, Newgrounds does recommend constructive criticism in the comments. ...besides, no offense, but it irritates me to no end when people put forward a problem without an attempt at a solution, especially when it's something that directly pertains to me, such as this.

[shu]

the melody, the chords sound off the key
anyway, here's my suggestion: don't use FL Keys
how long have you been making music?

K0TiC responds:

i didn't use fl keys lol, i tried to make it sound like plants vs zombies music so that's why some of the stuff sounds "old". I've been making music for 3 years now, but haven't really been as interested lately.

[Anguish]

the melodies of the 2nd break sound off the key
you need to make the build up sounds more powerful, the drop came in out of nowhere, not even a pre-drop sample, I almost had a heart attack. the bass sounds lack of mixing

FYRDXGR responds:

I think I know whats wrong. I dropped the master volume by a few DB before the drop and reset the DB at the drop. Maybe I dropped too many DB and it sounds too powerful. And I did as much mixing as I could on those bass sounds and the melody does sounds somewhat offkey but thats because theirs an Isotope Vinyl on it to give it a aged feel; but I can assure you everything is in key. Ill take your advice and apply it to my next piece. Thanks for the feedback!

[VRIME, Uboi - Lowryde]

i kinda don't like how you use that one main bass over and over again in a drop, lack of variation

VrimeMusic responds:

Thank you for your feedback! I'll try to keep that in mind next time.

[Discovery]

the drop is fucking repetitive, it has like one pattern of melody only, I'd suggest adding the hit bass, growl or play around with the melody for variation

baryiscool responds:

Yes it really is repetitive
I'm going to work on it today to see if I could change the drop so it has more variation

[Monody - Jam Remix]

what device do you use? cuz i want you to get a better DAW

Fox4567 responds:

The thing is, I use Windows and use something called Soundtrap, but I need a Mac and Garageband / FL Studio to do good stuff... yeah i can do so much better with that...

[ZetheX - Devour]

keep this style up
btw, i had skrillex vibes here