the drums are pretty loud, and clipping does not equal to heaviness
transitions are quite awkward, I'd say they're anti-climatic, I recommend adding drum fill. Another thing that adds to this awkwardness is the emptiness of the intro/break
the drums are pretty loud, and clipping does not equal to heaviness
transitions are quite awkward, I'd say they're anti-climatic, I recommend adding drum fill. Another thing that adds to this awkwardness is the emptiness of the intro/break
there are some interesting melodies here, but i suggest you switch up/ change it so that it doesn't sound repetitive
AI music?
not quite lol
i like the riffs
tho if it helps, you should slow down so you don't miss any beat
Thanks for recommendation.
did you record this on your phone
i know lofi has jazzy and complicated chords and allat but at some point you gotta remember that it's music to relax, not music to hear dissonance (01:28)
sometimes that dissonance can work to tell a story believe it or not some lofi does have it but it's still chill with that dissonance, if you want a more dissonant lofi track check out sylva, also lo-fi doesn't have to be all complex my lofi stuff is pretty simple to make if you know how music works.
god i love the 0:49 part so much, it reminds me of the classic piano tracks
did you play this live? cuz it sounds very very nice
No this cannot be played live (unless as a duet), as the notation stated I made this version a while ago before even starting to actually play the piece and settled eventually for the other version which is also uploaded. :)
i can feel the chilling vibe, very nice choice of instrument
tho, you should have a better choice of drums, the kick is too bright, it belongs more to EDM
thanks for the feedback. yeah you are absolutely right about the drums, infact i just changed them thanks to you and i feels it better now and hope everyone else feels like the drums more fit now. thanks again for the feedback and that i got the change in :)
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