JinZ's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[YOW]

i dont like the part where the main melody plays, it sounds very off, doesn't fit with the other elements like drums or bass, especially that half step part

[GYZA - Cyberlight (S0MBRA Remix)]

yep, vomitstep is still a thing today

S0MBRASOUNDS responds:

The second drop certainly suggests that

[la danse du subconscient]

i love edm with odd time signature, it's rare but it's good and creative

DelitescentAria responds:

i love experimenting so i might make more, i think its fun

[Late evening groove]

the background elements (drums, chords, etc) is great but the main melody is odd, it sounds like you were placing random notes without knowing the right key or chord progression

Dominuus responds:

That's totally understandable, I'm not great at melodies at the moment, so I've been trying to practice making some. I'll try my hardest to make them fit in with the background elements more in the future. Thanks for the feedback!!!

[Ready to Rumble]

how long have you been making music

Zipf responds:

idk like a month or two

[stars]

this isn't dubstep, it's rather a trance
one thing I'd like to suggest is that you should play around with the melody and chords, in general, the track is pretty repetitive, and the intro and the outro are the exact same.
but i like the way you vary the bass melody with the main one at 01:22

Typewriter7051 responds:

yeah I'm too lazy to find the correct genre for it so I mark everything dubstep lmao

[Join the Legion]

i like how you added some clicks in the background to increase the intensity lmao

DJSimonOriole responds:

Thanks for the response. I kinda wanted to do this for so long xD

[Cheetahmen vs Jaguarman -Tekken7 Mix- (Action 52 x Tekken x Fahad Lami Remix)]

there's something wrong about this track in general, it's quiet, maybe because of the lack of compression
btw, use fl 20 now

FahadLami-NG responds:

I'll fix it 😉

["Discharge line 2.0" [no.257]]

suddenly

sax

[Acri - lucid]

i know theres a lot, i mean, a LOT of stuff needs to be fixed here, but i think what you need is time, you're a beginner arent ya? don't worry, no one starts off good. Have your time! slowly and surely develop yourself
one thing i'd like to mention doe, pls do fix the chord progression next time :) it sounds very odd here at 02:10, if you have some time, why not watch some music theory video? :)

Acri responds:

yeah i started around a year ago