JinZ's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rings]

not sure why 00:36 has so much sub
also, I cant figure out whether this 00:22 and 00:59 is a build up or a drop anymore, you made the listener feel hype but then, there was no actual drops which were pretty disappointing
this 02:09, don't let it be so empty, at least add more elements and reverbs

IrisStar responds:

haha, I looked at ur profile and apparently u review a lot. When I saw this review I was so discouraged, but I guess it's good criticism. Most of your criticisms I agree with, but the track was designed to be more minimal and ambient. I mostly got really down because you didn't give any compliments, which is something every review should have to keep it balanced. For a second I felt like my song was trash. So next time you review songs maybe consider giving some positive feedback too, and make it less of a list of criticisms. I kinda pictured you listening to the song and just writing a list of bad things. Keep in mind I'm really proud of this, so seeing that it didn't get the response I imagined I got really upset. I WILL KEEP IMPROVING THOUGH. I've only been producing for not even 2 years and I am willing to soak in as much information I can to improve. Thanks for the feedback!

[Dancerave World (Dance Edit)]

lmfao this brought me back some memories, this is exactly what "rave" music sounds like in the early 2000s
love the melodies and the voices

Eeyanzai responds:

Thank You!

[LCM - Steamed Hams (STEAMED HAMS DUBSTEP REMIX)]

the drop (basses and drums) is weird and loud

LCM responds:

Still improving doe xd

[ID MOMENT]

you have ott
but you dont know how to use it properly
btw ever heard of sidechain?

FatdelxeGD responds:

Yeah ive heard of side chain, and this actually uses it but sometimes when I make tracks with a bunch of instruments, it overpowers the side chain that's going on in every instrument. I'll try to fix that if its a problem. And side note: I didn't use OTT on all of the instruments cause a lot of them sound better without it. Thanks for pointing out! it helps a lot

[Smooth]

lack of mixing, hence the audio wave is fat, and sounds messy

GDRyuHayabusa1988 responds:

I was too lazy to do anything further when the main part of track was done, so I didn't want to mixing. But if this is the case, I will try to improve it!

[Prologue]

synthwave with 8bit? interesting

stouf7908 responds:

Thx

[Mellow Maria ~Long Version~]

well, i'd answer yes i like jazz
why? well here's an example:

EezySeven responds:

I'm fairly new to Jazz, actually. I got a sort-of a Jazz-awakening sometime last year. There's just something about that swing rhythm and jazzy melodies that's addictive.

[Thaw]

not liking those tags

ZLEAP responds:

Some say the sky is falling. I say it has already fallen.

I hope someone or something comes along and proves us wrong but until then...

The end is nigh.

Thanks.

[Retaliation]

i think you nailed the bass
but the drums are too loud, compress them
the 3rd drop drum pattern doesn't really fit with riddim, but I guess you can do that for originality
I really suggest replacing the snare with the clap

SOTAREKO responds:

Thank you for the advice! I'm still new to this genre so i'm working! haha