i feel worried when see the i eat children
very
it fucking fits the song mood lmfao
and I swear I heard sans somewhere in 00:38
i feel worried when see the i eat children
very
it fucking fits the song mood lmfao
and I swear I heard sans somewhere in 00:38
yeah that was sans
eh, the track is good on its own
nothing to judge
thanks! jsjs
a bit slow to an average complextro track
im not a fan of that intro
until 15 secs in, the track is too loud, ever heard of mixing? the melody sounds off the key
but hey, at least the drop helped
I suggest making a break and another build up between the full step pattern drop and the half step drop
rough criticism but it’ll help me in the long run, thanks a ton dude!
i think you nailed the synths but the fx you put isn't, like 00:54 or 01:20, they are too loud
Should be fixed now ;)
not sure why 00:36 has so much sub
also, I cant figure out whether this 00:22 and 00:59 is a build up or a drop anymore, you made the listener feel hype but then, there was no actual drops which were pretty disappointing
this 02:09, don't let it be so empty, at least add more elements and reverbs
haha, I looked at ur profile and apparently u review a lot. When I saw this review I was so discouraged, but I guess it's good criticism. Most of your criticisms I agree with, but the track was designed to be more minimal and ambient. I mostly got really down because you didn't give any compliments, which is something every review should have to keep it balanced. For a second I felt like my song was trash. So next time you review songs maybe consider giving some positive feedback too, and make it less of a list of criticisms. I kinda pictured you listening to the song and just writing a list of bad things. Keep in mind I'm really proud of this, so seeing that it didn't get the response I imagined I got really upset. I WILL KEEP IMPROVING THOUGH. I've only been producing for not even 2 years and I am willing to soak in as much information I can to improve. Thanks for the feedback!
lmfao this brought me back some memories, this is exactly what "rave" music sounds like in the early 2000s
love the melodies and the voices
Thank You!
the drop (basses and drums) is weird and loud
Still improving doe xd
you have ott
but you dont know how to use it properly
btw ever heard of sidechain?
Yeah ive heard of side chain, and this actually uses it but sometimes when I make tracks with a bunch of instruments, it overpowers the side chain that's going on in every instrument. I'll try to fix that if its a problem. And side note: I didn't use OTT on all of the instruments cause a lot of them sound better without it. Thanks for pointing out! it helps a lot
lack of mixing, hence the audio wave is fat, and sounds messy
I was too lazy to do anything further when the main part of track was done, so I didn't want to mixing. But if this is the case, I will try to improve it!
synthwave with 8bit? interesting
Thx
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